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Wednesday, March 27, 2013

Black-out or Erasure Poetry


Today the first graders had a little time to explore different things as the second graders enjoyed a sample Mandarin lesson with Fan.

I read a beautiful picture book called All the Places to Love by Patricia MacLachlan. Afterwords, I showed them a page I had copied, and demonstrated how - by circling words or phases you liked and then blacking out the rest - you could make a type of poem. 

While only a few children attempted to do this with a different page of text, the children who did found it quite enjoyable. Here is what Niccolo was able to do - which, I have to admit, made my paltry attempt pale in comparison.

Here is what Niccolo started with:


Here is the finished poem:

  
We climbed
our 
                        tree
to eat fruit.

                I see the sun rise on one side.

1 comment:

Fran Loosen said...

That book makes me *sob*. I can barely get through it. Beautiful.